Feedback and suggestion for "Design Practice 1"

Here were some feedback and suggestion our lecturer give me:

For my animation, my lecturers said that the illustration could be refined so the animation could be more funnier. For project 2, the idea of remote control was acceptable. However, my lecturer mentioned that, the project might turn into too crafty if I use cardboard as the main material to make a remote control. Rather than creating a remote control, I was suggested to design a poster or create a video instruction and provide "situation" to teach my target audience how to use the remote control. She also gave me some examples to help me to get more ideas.

During the semester break, we were asked to continue doing our project 2, and we can show our progress to our lecture via email.