Visual Book Sketches - 2

After having tutorial with my lecturer, she asked me to change some scene so that the visual book would be related to the place I would like to choose. This was because I drew a girl character and she didn't look like a working person. Moreover, there was no any scene to show the person was working and she felt stress because of her job. Therefore, the story couldn't related to the places and the scene I saw before.

Therefore, I changed some scenes after I went back home. I tried to draw the character who is wearing suit, so that the character can look like a working person.

Here are the sketches after tutorial time: