Week 10 - Progress

This week, I try to come out with a few storyboard for my independent project. After the consultation, my lecturer told me that my storyline can be funnier. Therefore, I keep improving my storyline this week. However, there are two more storyline I need to refine again. I hope I can refine it on next week.

I have also come out with some storyboard for the Instagram post. I think it can be improved when I start doing design, like the layout and storyline. But the overall feedback is ok for the storyline.

Even though the feedback is ok, but I have also try to improve my storyline. At the meanwhile, I have also think about title design for my webtoon.

My lecturer has given me some feedback for this storyline, like how to make it funnier, and I am going to refine and improve it before the next tutorial, so I can start doing digital drawing.

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For my external project, I have come out five detail sketches and my lecturer has given me some comment on it. After the tutorial, I try to find more visual references when I am improving my design. Then, I come out with one more idea which is about the Arcade Crane Claw Machine. After I sketch it out, I send it to my lecturer, and he agree that this idea is better and it can convey my message more clearer.

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Last but not least, I have started doing my mood board, and I hope I can finalise it on the next Tuesday so I can follow back my timeline which I had created last week.

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To be continue...