Tutorial (Week 11)

This week, I show my lecturer about the new storyline that I have done.

New Storyline:

There is a boy who his parents' relationship is not really good, and his father like to drink beer. One day, he heard some sound so he go and check what happen. He see his father want to hit his mother. He stop it but then he started become rebel, and do not listen to his father anymore. Another day, he go out and buy something, when he go back home, he heard some sound again. When he walk in the house, he see his father hit his mother again. He try to stop it, but his mother get hit by his father. His mother is injured. This time, he can't control himself and want to hit back his father. However, his mother stop him to do that. Then, his mother and he leave the home.

I have also tried to draw the storyboard for it:

Not only that, I have also tried to explore the technique of taking photos:

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Feedback and Suggestion:

-The storyline can be refined, add few more scenes

-Shadow photos are okay, try to find a way to solve the problems (paper cannot stand straight when taking photos)

-Start taking other photos